Party of Smoke and Wildfire - From My College Creative Writing Course #2

Hey, young bloods!

Last week, I started taking an online creative writing course through the University of Iowa. For our second writing exercise, we had to describe the vibe of a party without writing a story about it (primarily through the use of concrete details). I'm not sure how I did on the "concrete details" front, but I am pretty proud of the rest of what I wrote! Therefore, I decided to share it with you all today. I hope you enjoy :)






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Namarië,
Ellie

5 comments:

  1. Ahhhhh so goodddddd I love your writing. What a neat project!

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  2. YOUR WRITING ALWAYS BLOWS ME AWAY! I could actually picture the scenes you spoke of as though they were images in my head, and you used imagery perfectly and nothing seemed out of place and....it was amazing. I especially loved the 'five-pointed stars' thing: well done, Ellie. *whoops and cheers from the audience of the Internet*

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  3. WOW. WOW. THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING.
    (also I noticed you snuck Brendon Urie and Halsey in there. You can't fool my emo ass by only putting the last names lol)
    But honestly that was so poetic and GORGEOUS.

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